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Nose

Describe the shape from the bridge down, then show what it does.

Pencil study of a freckled nose framed by soft clouds
freckles, mapped like weather
Pencil study of a nose in profile surrounded by drifting clouds
profile study, no. 007

01Start with a plain description

straight · long · short · small · large · broad · narrow · upturned · prominent

02Add shape

aquiline · Roman · button · snub · hooked · flat · delicate · wide-based · narrow-bridged · long and thin

03Size & proportion

small and neat · large · dominant · too big for the face · a nose that arrives before the rest of them · a nose set small in a wide face

04Bridge

high · low · flat · straight · bumped · dipped · broken and reset · narrow at the top · wide at the base

05Tip

rounded · pointed · bulbous · blunt · upturned · drooping · slightly bent to one side

06Nostrils

narrow · flared · wide · delicate · pinched · visible from the front

07Distinctive features

freckles across the bridge · a crooked line from an old break · a stud · a septum ring · a sunburn peeling off the tip · a cold-pink tip · a scar along one side

08Expression & movement

wrinkles in disgust · flares in anger · twitches with amusement · scrunches when laughing · sniffs, snorts, or sniffles · turns red first when crying · pressed against cold glass

In context

a nose that reddens first when they cry · a nose pinched by glasses · a nose wrinkled over a smell they won't mention

09Alternatives to “nose”

profile · bridge · tip · nostrils · features · the line of the nose

10Examples in a sentence

  • Shape

    “He had a long, straight nose that made every expression look disapproving.”

  • Distinctive

    “Her nose was crooked at the bridge, a souvenir from a childhood fall.”

  • Movement

    “His nostrils flared once, a tell she'd learned to read.”

  • Detail

    “Freckles crossed the bridge of her nose, thicker where the sun hit hardest.”

  • Minimal

    “The small clerk had a button nose.”

11Writing notes

  • Describe the individual. Treat the nose as one person's feature, not a marker of an entire group.
  • Avoid shorthand and stereotype. Specific shape words say more than a generic label.
  • Give it a job. Noses are good for reactions: a wrinkle at a smell, a flare at an insult.
  • Don't inventory every part. Bridge, tip, nostrils, and size are tools, not a checklist that must all appear in one description.
  • Let proportion matter. A nose can feel prominent, delicate, crooked, or memorable because of how it sits in the entire face.
  • Use movement sparingly. A single nostril flare can communicate more than repeatedly describing the nose itself.

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